Friday, 26 July 2019

Winter



We are learning to describe.

I enjoyed finishing my work.

I found it tricky making sure it made sense.

Outside, branches were covered in snow and frost.
A thick sheet of snow coated the ground.
Snowflakes fell through the air.
Mist covered the mountain tops.
       

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora India,
    I liked the adjectives and juicy verbs you used - it made me feel cold. What are you going to add to your success criteria next time?
    Mā te wā,
    Mrs Naden

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